1

Problem

The audience murmured as the plot became more convoluted than expected in confusion while the director revealed the twist.

2

Clue

Modifiers are words that describe the ways of the subject when arranged in a sentence.

3

Hint

Modifiers give detailed information and description of the other part of the sentence.

4

Sumup

Please summarize choices

5

Step

CHOICES

6

Choice-A

The audience murmured in confusion as the plot became more convoluted than expected while the director revealed the twist. The sentence is incorrect because it misplaces the modifier, making it unclear what action is confused. the modifier "while the director revealed the twist" is misplaced, making the sequence of events unclear.

Wrong No change

7

Choice-B

As the director revealed the twist, the audience murmuring in confusion as the plot became more convolute than expect. The sentence is incorrect because "Murmuring" should be "murmured" to match the past tense used in the rest of the sentence. "Convolute" should be "convoluted" to correctly describe the plot. "Than expect" should be "than expected" to form a proper comparative phrase, and the sequence of events is unclear.

Wrong As the director revealed the twist, the audience murmuring in confusion as the plot became more convolute than expect.

8

Choice-C

Than expected while the director revealed the twist. The audience murmured in confusion as the plot became more convoluted. The sentence is incorrect; the first part of the sentence, "than expected while the director revealed the twist." is a fragment and does not form a complete thought. It needs to be connected to the main clause to provide context and clarity. The sentence lacks proper punctuation and structure. The two parts need to be combined properly to form a coherent sentence.

Wrong Than expected while the director revealed the twist. The audience murmured in confusion as the plot became more convoluted.

9

Choice-D

As the director revealed the twist, the audience murmured in confusion as the plot became more convoluted than expected. The sentence is correct. It has a clear subject ("the director") and verb ("revealed"), forming a complete thought. The main clause also has a clear subject and verb, with an additional clause introduced by "as." The sentence maintains a consistent past tense throughout, which helps in maintaining coherence.

Correct As the director revealed the twist, the audience murmured in confusion as the plot became more convoluted than expected.

10

Step

Correct sentence - As the director revealed the twist, the audience murmured in confusion as the plot became more convoluted than expected.

11

Answer

Option D

12

Sumup

Please summarize choices