1

We enjoyed the baked cookies filled freshly the room with a delicious, warm aroma.

A) No change

B) We enjoyed the cookies that filled the room freshly baked with a delicious; aroma.

C) We enjoyed the freshly baked cookies that filled the room with warm aroma,a delicious.

D) We enjoyed the freshly baked cookies that filled the room with a delicious, warm aroma.

2

Trying to stay focused as the concert stretched on, a performance that was surprisingly uninspired Alex listened to.

A) No change

B) Alex, trying to stay focused as the concert stretched on, listened to a surprisingly uninspired performance.

C) Performance that was surprisingly uninspired. alex, trying to stay focused as the concert stretched on, listened.

D) Concert stretched on, listened to a performance that was surprisingly Alex, trying to stay focused as the uninspired.

3

[underline]*Barely keeping his head up as the meeting dragged on, a discussion that was incredibly dull Mark sat through *.

A) No change

B) Mark, discussion that was incredibly dull barely keeping his head up as the meeting dragged on.

C) Mark, barely keeping his head up as the meeting dragged on, sat through an incredibly dull discussion.

D) Sat through a discussion, dragged on barely keeping his head up as the meeting Mark, that was incredibly dull.

4

We saw a strangely shaped cloud drifting slowly above the mountains during the calm morning walk.

A) No change

B) We saw a strange shaped cloud drifting slowly above the mountains during calm morning walk.

C) We saw a strangely shape cloud drifting slowly above the mountains during calmed morning walk.

D) We saw a strangely shaped clouds drift slowly above mountain during the calm morning walk.

5

Trying to suppress her yawns as the movie plodded along, Sarah a film that was painfully slow watched.

A) No change

B) Sarah watched a film that was painfully slow, trying to suppress her yawns as the movie plodded along.

C) Film that was painfully slow, Sarah watched a trying to suppress her yawns as the movie plodded along.

D) Sarah watched a trying to suppress her yawns as the movie plodded along film that was painfully slow.

6

John tried to fix the computer, which was constantly malfunctioning, feeling frustrated by the endless errors.

A) No change

B) which was constantly malfunctioning, feeling frustrated john tried to fix the computer, by the endless errors.

C) Frustrated by the endless errors john tried to fix the computer, which was feeling constantly malfunctioning computer.

D) Frustrated by the endless errors john tried to fix the computer; which was malfunctioning computer feeling constantly.

7

Battling the heavy wind, Tom flew a kite difficult to control that was.

A) No change

B) The heavy wind tom flew a kite that was difficult to control while battling.

C) Difficult to control tom flew a kite that was while battling the heavy wind.

D) Tom flew a kite that was difficult to control while battling the heavy wind.

8

Shivering in the cold, Jenny waited for a bus that was running late.

A) No change

B) waited for the bus jenny, shivering in the cold, that was running late.

C) Jenny, shivering in the cold, waited for the bus that was running late.

D) That was running late jenny, shivering in the cold, waited for the bus.

9

She sang a beautifully compose song during festival, impresses everyone in the large crowd.

A) No change

B) She sang a beautifully composed song during the festival, impressing everyone in the large crowd.

C) She sang a beautiful composed songs during the festival, impress everyone in the large crowd.

D) She sing a beautifully composed song during the festival, impressing everyone in large crowd.

10

Sarah spoke to her friend who was seat far; away over the loud music strain to hear.

A) No change

B) Far away over the loud music Strain to hear Sarah spoke to her friend who was seat.

C) Her friend who was seated far away over the loud music Sarah speak Straining to hear.

D) Straining to hear over the loud music, Sarah spoke to her friend who was seated far away.