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Title: Parallel Structure

Grade: 8-a Lesson: S2-L1

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Step	Type	Explanation	Answer
1	Problem	Children are playing in the play area by jumps and spins, which is very dangerous.
2	Clue	A sentence’s Parallel structure helps maintain a consistent tense and voice, with correct conjunctions and prepositions.
3	Hint	Playing is a verb that ends in 'ing,' hence jumping and spinning are the correct choice to establish a parallel structure in the sentence.
4	Sumup	Can you summarize what you’ve understood in the above steps?
5	Choice.A	Children are playing in the play area by jumps and spins, which is very dangerous. The sentence "Children are playing in the play area by jumps and spins, which is very dangerous" has a slight issue with clarity and structure. The phrase "by jumps and spins" may cause confusion, and the relative pronoun "which" is ambiguous.	No change
6	Choice.B	Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spins, which is very dangerous. The sentence "Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spins, which is very dangerous" has a slight issue with parallelism. The phrase "by jumping and spins" doesn’t maintain a consistent structure.	jumping and spins +
7	Choice.C	Children are playing in the play area by to jump and spinning, which is very dangerous. The sentence "Children are playing in the play area by to jump and spinning, which is very dangerous" is incorrect due to the awkward phrasing and misuse of the infinitive "to jump" and the gerund "spinning."	to jump and spinning
8	Choice.D	Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spinning, which is very dangerous. The sentence "Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spinning, which is very dangerous" is correct. This sentence effectively conveys that children are engaging in activities involving jumping and spinning in the play area. The use of the gerunds "jumping" and "spinning" maintains parallel structure, and the phrase "which is very dangerous" appropriately connects to the preceding action, indicating the potential danger associated with these activities.	jumping and spinning
9	Step:	Correct sentence	Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spinning, which is very dangerous.
10	Answer	Option	D
11	Sumup	Can you summarize what you’ve understood in the above steps?

Step

Type

Explanation

Answer

Problem

Children are playing in the play area by jumps and spins, which is very dangerous.

Clue

A sentence’s Parallel structure helps maintain a consistent tense and voice, with correct conjunctions and prepositions.

Hint

Playing is a verb that ends in 'ing,' hence jumping and spinning are the correct choice to establish a parallel structure in the sentence.

Sumup

Can you summarize what you’ve understood in the above steps?

Choice.A

Children are playing in the play area by jumps and spins, which is very dangerous.

The sentence "Children are playing in the play area by jumps and spins, which is very dangerous" has a slight issue with clarity and structure. The phrase "by jumps and spins" may cause confusion, and the relative pronoun "which" is ambiguous.

No change

Choice.B

Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spins, which is very dangerous.

The sentence "Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spins, which is very dangerous" has a slight issue with parallelism. The phrase "by jumping and spins" doesn’t maintain a consistent structure.

jumping and spins +

Choice.C

Children are playing in the play area by to jump and spinning, which is very dangerous.

The sentence "Children are playing in the play area by to jump and spinning, which is very dangerous" is incorrect due to the awkward phrasing and misuse of the infinitive "to jump" and the gerund "spinning."

to jump and spinning

Choice.D

Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spinning, which is very dangerous.

The sentence "Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spinning, which is very dangerous" is correct. This sentence effectively conveys that children are engaging in activities involving jumping and spinning in the play area. The use of the gerunds "jumping" and "spinning" maintains parallel structure, and the phrase "which is very dangerous" appropriately connects to the preceding action, indicating the potential danger associated with these activities.

jumping and spinning

Step:

Correct sentence

Children are playing in the play area by jumping and spinning, which is very dangerous.

Answer

Option

Sumup

Can you summarize what you’ve understood in the above steps?

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