Many fathers ;including my own) are often protective and caring toward their daughters.

A) No change

B) fathers (including

C) fathers' including

D) fathers! including

Mr. Smith — who was my college chemistry professor" received the Nobel Prize.

A) No change

B) professor! received

C) professor: received

D) professor — received

Though Jamie hated getting wet in the rain, almost as much as a cat hates getting wet, she decided that participating in the rain dance was worth the risk.

A) No change

B) rain; almost

C) rain! almost

D) rain-- almost

We will go with Caroline; David’s wife, to the grocery store after dinner.

A) No change

B) Caroline' David’s

C) Caroline — David’s

D) Caroline! David’s

"Miniature football which is also known as ""mini football' is a game that is popular with children and adults alike.

A) No change

B) football, which is also known as "mini football" is

C) "football which is also known as ""mini football"" is"

D) "football, which is also known as mini football is"

Jamie, who reads comics rarely reads novels: however, her friend enjoys novels.

A) No change

B) comics;rarely reads novels;

C) comics rarely reads novels;

D) comics, rarely reads novels;

When she paints, whether it’s with oil painting or sketches, my friend gets in the zone.

A) No change

B) paints whether

C) paints whether,

D) paints; whether

What I want to know I told her; why she left the office early.

A) No change

B) her! why

C) her: why

D) her (why

My friend - along with her family- invited me to celebrate Christmas with them.

A) No change

B) friend, along with her family, invited

C) friend, along with her family- invited

D) friend, along with her family: invited

The newest item at the auction; a Chinese vase from 1860, have the highest number of bidders.

A) No change

B) auction, (a Chinese vase from 1860),

C) auction: a Chinese vase from 1860,

D) auction, a Chinese vase from 1860,