Everyone hoped, Dane would get in, after his sister and two brothers had gone to their first-choice schools.

A) No change

B) hoped, Dane would get in after his sister

C) hoped Dane would get in after his sister

D) hoped and Dane would get in after his sister

Jonathan went to the park with his parents, his cat Yoongi, and dog Browny.

A) No change

B) parents:

C) parents;

D) parents"

Jackson’s hobbies include jumping off planes, swimming underwater and eating jellyfish.

A) No change

B) planes-- swimming underwater, and

C) planes, swimming underwater, and

D) planes swimming underwater; and

The instructor asked his trainees to bring three items on the field trip sunscreen! money for lunch, and a bag.

A) No change

B) field trip; sunscreen; money for lunch, and a bag.

C) field trip sunscreen money for lunch and a bag

D) field trip: sunscreen, money for lunch, and a bag.

Painting is one of my favorite pastimes, it relaxes; rejuvenates, and refreshes my mind; and it provides me with something creative.

A) No change

B) pastimes: it relaxes, rejuvenates,

C) pastimes: it relaxes rejuvenates

D) pastimes: it relaxes, rejuvenates,

During his career, He has worked in three different places: California, Dallas; New York City; and San Francisco.

A) No change

B) Dallas; New York City; and

C) Dallas: New York City, and

D) Dallas' New York City' and

Health experts suggest that people should limit their alcohol consumption due to its potential negative impact on the liver heart and kidneys.

A) No change

B) liver and heart

C) liver; heart,

D) liver: heart:

Festivals offer many people a greatopportunity to enjoy time with friends and family and donate money, food, or goods to charitable organizations.

A) No change

B) family to donate

C) family: donate

D) family; donate

After school, Hanna had three options! getting a job; applying to graduate school, or becoming a criminal.

A) No change

B) options: getting a job,

C) options" getting a job,

D) options? getting a job,

My teacher said today in the class, "Tigers are carnivorous, or meat-eating, mammals."

A) No change

B) class, 'Tigers

C) class; "Tigers

D) class